Hi Everyone.

Jackie sent me her draft so that she can get some feedback. I have posted the essay on a wiki page. Please take some time to read it and then add comments directly to the page. Remember to think about the details of setting, character, and object. Also, the wire/conflict and dialogue.

http://jessdecola.wikispaces.com/PEER+REVIEW+DRAFTS

Thanks in advance for your help. If anyone else wants to post a draft there - you can just post it on the wiki (using the "edit this page" button and "add a file") or by sending it to me.

I hope you are enjoying your weekend